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Athina :::::: Your essays cover many complicated subjects. . . . In each paragraph, you walk your readers through a doorway into a new, eccentrically decorated room.

In 'Connection,' You begin by recounting a pending separation and how it might be handled. You also write about interpersonal relationships in general and how they are formed. Write a little about how our innate 'need' for relationships came from nature and how modern devices now affect these relationships.

In one 'room,' you write about the pluses and minuses of spending time alone.

This is a big building that you walk us through, with many rooms to check out in deeper detail.

Reading your writing, I feel a little like a computer technician who has removed all the tiny silver screws from the back of a 27-year-old laptop, removed the cover, and, on opening, finds an unbelievably complex Motherboard he wants to understand.

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